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The Hague Trials:
War crimes court cases
Not just weak nations basis
Start all states phases
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Trials and tribulations should not be restrictive trails leading to the doorsteps of selected tribes.
Editing stage:
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Comments
Gunnar Hedlund
Sun, 2017-11-26 12:08
you've need to expand your poetic prowess
being stuck in a rut is no good, sorry.
this, like many others of yours, is forced.
apologies
g
OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2017-11-27 01:40
Gunnar
Please read all my other poems posted before coming to a hasty conclusion. As always, whatever your final opinion is, you are entitled to it and thanks for your feedback.
OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2017-11-27 01:44
Gunnar
Please read all my other poems posted before coming to a hasty conclusion. As always, whatever your final opinion is, you are entitled to it and thanks for your feedback.
OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2017-11-27 01:57
Gunnar
Rhyku is my original version of Haiku poetry (three lines of 5-7-5 syllables that rhyme with a corresponding title) and that is the reason why many of my poems are Rhykus. While a number of reviewers may find the poems forced and without depth, Rhykus are like the Twitter version of Poetry.
Rhykus convey a first line issue, followed by a second line of detail and subsequently a third line of the solution.
I find Rhykus effectively encapsulate political as well as social issues in a short format that allows those that view / read the Rhykus, possessing limited time and short attention spans, an ideal form of expression that is readily understood.
OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2017-11-27 01:42
Reviewers
Politics makes for a range of prose