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Aural Lotion
sweet nothings
after-glowing
glide
tenderly
mingling
love's sheen
like liquid starlight
dripping
fragrant
kisses
lingering
mid-air
fading
slowly
reluctantly
into sleepy
invisible
silence
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
eightmenout
Thu, 2014-11-20 12:12
Al
Love it. Simple. Flows very well. Language is strong.
Thanks,
Scott
brittle light
Fri, 2014-11-21 01:49
Scott
you've touched on all the facets I was concerned with.
thanks
Al
Rula
Fri, 2014-11-21 01:18
Agree with scott
and it gives me a smile.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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brittle light
Fri, 2014-11-21 01:51
thank you so much
thank you so much
I appreciate your response...It gives me a smile
Al