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you

i dont want to be your lover,
i dont want to be your companion,
i want to be your equal.

how you brush on life's canvas,
how you handle the noise of this world
what you think and feel,
the full potential of your essence
i want to learn all about you.

our hearts will beat in sync,
our core's will fuse together,
the greatest act of love
you're mine,
and i'm yours.

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this poem is related to my previous poem that i posted. didnt know what to title it so i just put something basic lol. let me know what you think :)
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you are trying to make a new start with someone new and letting them know what you expect from the get-go. I went back and read your last one to gain a sense of why this is related to it. I like your assertion that you want to be equal partners and not just somebody's lover, companion. It fits well with the last one, where you put all your hopes on the [companion/lover].
~ Geezer.
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