I really enjoyed your poem for the content, it's a hard thing to live with, I'm sure.
My son suffers from the same as you and I know that he struggles too. I did like the way you wrote, as though it was really the thoughts that were going through your head. Keep your chin up and keep writing. P.S. Welcome to Neo! ~ Geezer.
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very evocative. thanks for sharing a sensitive topic.

It is not easy to create in poetic verses what someone with BPD encounters. You have done a good job in creating that picture. Pretty touching.
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I missed your entrance, just found you on a discussion with Moonman, so I looked at this piece first.
Welcome to Neopoet and I hope that you find something that gives you something to hold.
It is a hard world where depression is shunned and this has been so for ever, but during the last 50 years there has been more thought gone into the way others can be.
Please don't worry about the comments now, later you may want to comment on others works a bit more as you come to know them.
Shout and scream at life as you wish, write it down, there are many that can't write and feel as you do.
I see you are in Lichfield I think the last time I was there was 1957, I was in the RAF then as a boy entrant but have gained a few years since.
Any time you need anything just ask even if we cant give everything we will listen, You take care and this write is great,
Yours, Ian.T (Sparrow)

Hello, thank you for sharing here your interesting write. All my sympathies to the protagonist. May she has more up time than down.