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Baby Girl

Submitted by Clentin on Sun, 2023-03-26 00:04

This newborn child
Makes our family so very proud

When I stare at her smiling face
My mind begins to race

My heart is filled with joy
Soft words I began to employ

Her lips pour out tiny sounds
That have no real bounds

Her eyes shine brightly
My words aren't taken lightly

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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

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neopoet

Sun, 2023-03-26 00:04

Neopoet AI

The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Congratulations on the arrival of your baby girl! She is sure to bring joy and love to your family. May she grow up healthy, happy, and surrounded by love. Cherish every moment with her and watch as she blossoms into a beautiful young woman. Best wishes to you and your family as you embark on this new journey together!

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Geezer

Sun, 2023-03-26 11:44

Congratulations...

on the new addition to the family, a happy little ditty for a celebration! ~ Geezer.
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Clentin

Sun, 2023-03-26 11:51

Thank you

Thank you
Just a short little poem after looking at a new picture of a new baby

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RoseBlack

Sun, 2023-03-26 15:13

Baby girl

A poem filled with pride and awe over this brand new bundle of joy! Congratulations!

~RoseBlack~

Clentin

Sun, 2023-03-26 15:20

Thank you

Thank you, just a short thought once I see her face I get excited!

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Baby Girl