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The poem "August" presents a vivid picture of summer, focusing on the month of August. The imagery used effectively conveys the warmth, brightness, and joy associated with this time of year.

The structure of the poem is consistent, with each stanza consisting of two lines. This consistency aids in creating a rhythmic flow. However, the meter within the lines varies, which can disrupt the rhythm. For example, "Kites blowing in the breeze" and "Kids are playing in the trees" have different syllable counts. To improve the rhythm, it might be beneficial to ensure a consistent syllable count within each line.

The language used in the poem is simple and accessible, which makes the poem easy to understand. However, the use of more complex language or metaphor could add depth and richness to the poem. For example, instead of saying "The sun is out to stay," the poet could use a metaphor to describe the sun and its effects.

The theme of the poem is clear and is effectively conveyed through the imagery and language. The poet uses the month of August to symbolize a time of joy, reflection, and planning for the future. This theme is reinforced throughout the poem, creating a cohesive piece.

In terms of improvement, the poem could benefit from more specific imagery. While the images of kites, kids playing, and picnics are effective, they are also quite common. Using more unique or specific images could make the poem more memorable and impactful.

Lastly, the poem could also benefit from a more developed ending. The final stanza introduces the idea of reflection and planning for the future, but this idea is not fully explored. Expanding on this idea could provide a more satisfying conclusion to the poem.

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Hello, Clentin,
A whimsical approach to August and the last days of traditional summer. The rhyme is simple and easy-going, which adds to the playfulness in the poem. I'm wondering about the meter - you may want to start by actually counting the syllables per each line, for example, "With August comes the Summer sun" - a nice opening line with eight syllables that flow really well in rhythm and logic. Then perhaps the following line continues to stick to the same measure and flow, "a time to go and have some fun." Remove "out" which throws the meter off a bit.
Enjoyed this light-hearted poem!
Thank you!
L

I like this one! Wasn't thinking about fall yet, but this poem puts a nice touch on fall.

Like Lavender wrote, a brush on the metre makes the reading more enjoyable.

Cheers!

Thomas