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You My Dears
You My Dears
You are poetic dear
I have to scientifically endear,
I do hope you all do hear
Albeit
I’d like to from you all individually hear...
The burst,
The tear,
The clouds,
the crowds
The thunder
the clap,
All are
and
shall be enlightened by poetry
Which undoubtedly you do bear
And
I dare say
I can ever at all compare...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Candlewitch
Fri, 2011-08-19 11:18
Dear Loved,
Very nicely done. Just one small thing:
in this line remove one of the "are"
You are are poetic dear
always, Cat
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loved
Fri, 2011-08-19 12:57
thanks Cat
since yesterday
I have been rather dozy
but ur observation has
now made me cozy
loved
author commentloved
Sat, 2011-08-20 12:41
neopoet
friends where are you all
loved
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