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Takes Time
you cant deceive me
I believe the
to be
nothing more then the human specie
when were born we cannot perceive with any ease
grow to learn grief, speech, peace, enemies
now im past twenty and ive sworn to decrease the
amount of un-friendly tendencies that help in my defeat
mind bending galleries my eyes see are telling
me different things about the universe
and the galaxies
when they receive light emitting bright from stars at night
such delight
yet a mystery
one we cant perceive, even with technology
a mind tease leaving me wondering
whats all this gotta be?
and dont give me any animal written type philosophy
its not right givin given were all living beings
these hypothesis about astronomy and religiously living
have gotten me dangerously closer to getting
everyone a fakers fee for fearlessly giving
their mere worthless speech about sipping
from the truth juice when their twenty two
thinkin they the whos who
in the booth like a caged a goose wholl prove to you
they the dude to move you
grove you
sooth you
induce you
fuse you
abuse you
but i refuse to
seduce you with loose truths like the fools do
use you like mules in Kapmando
you wont loose like when these mother fuckers scammed on you
Like Bam-Bam Bammed on through
I'll show you
Some of the scammed plans that they brew
a damned man is nothing to these goons
they dont give a damn theyll cram you for the chosen few
but I stand for the richous dudes
lend a hand when I can to bring life to the lifeless
strife just might miss on this
I write to wish a gift
dismiss a fist for eternal bliss
Comments
Candlewitch
Tue, 2011-12-27 13:48
Hello,
An interesting title for an interesting poem!
In this line:
its not right givin given were all living beings
I think you should delete "givin"
btw,
nice to meet you!
always, Cat
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