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Hopefully Polite edit......
In hope we live
In amazement we dwell
At which cross roads of life,
We shall meet,
no one can tell,
But we continue to hope
With our desires
limitations we have to cope.
Meet,
perhaps we shall never,
But friends,
We shall be for ever.
Hopefully...
No!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2011-08-09 12:37
Dear Loved,
Very nicely stated! Favorite lines:
In amazement we dwell
At which cross roads of life,
We shall meet,
none can tell,
But we continue to hope
always, Cat
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loved
Tue, 2011-08-09 14:25
thanks Cat
for ur continued support,
to which i have always looked forward to
thanks again ,
glad you come by
Please do more often
loved
author commentraj
Tue, 2011-08-09 14:46
Loved
nicely crafted piece this is...
raj (sublime_ocean)
loved
Tue, 2011-08-09 20:42
thank you ever so much raj
ur so kind and generous
in your contributions
thanks
kindly do walk by
more often
loved
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