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deeper than meaning
some poetry is dreamy
gliding words slide
winding
warm and enticing
yet a mystery remains
much the same as
not understanding my own dreams
I quite enjoy them anyway
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Comments
weirdelf
Mon, 2011-11-07 04:56
Cute
So do I.
Although I am suspicious of any poem that mentions the words poet, poetry, poem, writing or ink. It is too easy for us to disappear up our own arseholes.
cheers,
Jess
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Geezer
Mon, 2011-11-07 08:07
I quite...
understood the inference and connectivity of the lines:
Yet a mystery remains
much the same
as not understanding my own dreams
Not suspicious of this one at all, ~ Gee
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