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Eroticised
Eroticised
Thanks for the toooooooooooooo
I thought
You would have said
Only loved
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Can
Dooooooooooooooo
Shall...
Let the night ungown itself,
Let the snows melt away,
Then we shall see who is...
Drenched more you than ye,
You perhaps can forget me
In the hours torn apart
The legs we climb
I remain sublime
And
Tongue to toe
My mouth does blow
Wow you can say now,
Wow you won't
For some more of the liqueur
Needs to flow,
From where we cum
And
To where we go...
Yet wait...
Albeit!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
loved
Thu, 2011-03-03 12:31
men aren't that bad
if a woman loves a man
gives in to him
whenever
where ever
he wants it
and has her own ego
wrapped ...........................................YES CAPITALS WRAPPED......................
then men will lapse
in the arms of the woman
and colapse.
in wraps
then u can find
ur lIquer perhaps.
loved
crypticbard
Thu, 2011-03-03 17:04
ah!
Someone knows how to keep her man!
(and herself satisfied as well)
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'write on! let these words free.'
loved
Thu, 2011-03-03 21:56
thanks friend
when u surface
my heart misses a beat
what will he now
say >??????
it should cover both
man and woman
his and her.... got it????
HOPEFULLY
I have a three-year old child, what's your excuse?
NONE ,
AS I DON'T HAVE ONE
THAT UNG..........
lovelyhoney
loved
loved
Thu, 2011-03-03 17:10
___________HELLO_____________________________________
________________________________________________
I have a three-year old child, what's your excuse?
NONE ,
AS I DON'T HAVE ONE
THAT UNG..........
loved