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Hew man smile
Hew man smile….
A man speaks
on wasteland,
not many listen
to his words.
Though his smile
is well liked,
and the rocks fall
to ground.
Shelter he offers,
they smile.
One person speaks
of wrongdoing,
no monies for shelter.
He smiles.
They like his smile.
He’ll build on
wasteland
and smile…
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Last few words:
They can afford to smile, always..
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Comments
mona
Tue, 2011-03-01 21:40
The title of your poem brought me here to read the content.....
Always smiles brings hope, especially where I do work :: at hospital:: where people really need your smile.
Keep smile my friend coz smiles from the heart can dissolve the ice from the enemy's hearts and open new page
Mona Rose
Roscoe Lane
Wed, 2011-03-02 11:20
The smile,
The smile can also be evil, if belonging to people who don't care. Love Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentRoscoe Lane
Wed, 2011-03-02 11:21
But does,
But does the owner of the smile have good intentions. Love Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentRoscoe Lane
Wed, 2011-03-02 11:23
Thank you,
Thank you, polititions and business people, to often hide intent behind a smile..Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentRoscoe Lane
Thu, 2011-03-03 02:58
Thank you,
Thank you, even the prime minister was hawking his arms dealers round the Arab states, smiling and shaking hands while his buddies were selling death. Thank you again. Love Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
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