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Autumn Arrival Image Prompt Contest Winner!
The Winner of the Autumn Arrival Image Prompt Contest is scribbler
AUTUMN'S CUSP
Mid October a cool day
with a northern cooling breeze.
All hints of summer gone away.
The few green leaves are just a tease.
Tomorrow will bring the first frost
so this day finds me 'neath the trees
absorbing warmth before its lost
and limbering up titanium knees.
For I'm not what I once was.
Time has seen that I am not,
So I sit on a stump to take a pause
and breathe autumn's scent which I'd forgot.
Then turn my face up to the sky
as cool front winds begin to blow.
I watch the clouds as they race by.
They leave like friends I used to know.
My eyes water from sun's glare
so I drop my head down to my chest
letting my chin settle there
while I count the ways that I am blessed.
I'm blessed with our cabin in the trees
I'm blessed with seeing one more fall.
I'm blessed with grandchildren to tease.
I'm blessed with being here at all.
I watch a squirrel climb to its nest
for now the sun is getting low
so ere' it reaches ridge's crest
I arise then turn and go.
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Comments
kowque
Sun, 2024-09-22 20:15
Nailed it
This poem made me want to experience every line in real life
Wow
Koki
scribbler
Sun, 2024-09-22 23:42
Thank you
I always hope I can get readers to join me in my walks
kowque
Mon, 2024-09-30 17:40
I'm fascinated
By these seasonal poetic prompts
It's actually very hot this side hehehehe
I love the grandchildren line...it rings true. Regardless of the season.
This is a beautiful piece.
Thank you
Koki
scribbler
Wed, 2024-10-02 00:19
We are just getting into autumn her but we are recovering
from a hurricane. appreciate your dropping by
Candlewitch
Wed, 2024-10-02 08:40
Dearest Stan,
A beautiful poem that brings a sense of awe to the reader... Congrats!!!
* many hugs, Cat
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