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Soldier of freedom
Unsolicited garbage spilled
Upon the battle field
Weapons formulated to destroy
Obliterate all meaning
Swagger and bluff
you entered the arena
ready for war
Arrogance unyielding
Opposition shielded
In the trenches shooting back
Snipers ready to attack
Soldiers of freedom
Battle commences individualism
Is our weapon
Nonconformity our armour
Liberty our choice
Last few words:
Excuse lack of punctuation and poor lay out for now please , I will come back to that Lol!!
Thank you
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Comments
Roscoe Lane
Sun, 2011-10-16 03:02
No need for,
No need for excuses it's great, and the last verse nails it. Terrific write . Regards Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
lou
Sun, 2011-10-16 03:35
Roscoe
Thank you very much
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Hooded Stranger
Sun, 2011-10-16 10:54
Lou
Lou,
dreadful use of punctuation and layout is pants!
LOL!
HS
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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.
lou
Sun, 2011-10-16 11:32
Dan
Cheeky Bugger !!!
LMAO!!
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
magics02
Sun, 2011-10-16 14:21
Lou
Spot On
Warrior Lou!!
Great writing here I like it
Mona
xox