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I shall not be gone for long
I shall not be gone for long
but where I now belong
is far, far forlorn
sooner than later
I may be gone
But
hope to return
with Love to all
from Loved Anon...
I now reside
In a different world
they call paradice,
not paradise
but
where their is no ice,
only infested by mice.
None-the-less
life here is also very nice.
I miss you all too.
With love to all
who still loved Loved...
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Comments
magics02
Mon, 2011-09-19 11:47
Loved
We might leave for a while
but we all come back
to share a smile..
Mona
loved
Mon, 2011-10-03 10:55
thanx magic
Lost memory
Who are you they ask,
silently,
with a choked voice,
I reply
‘tis I,
yeah, me...
you once knew
Loved.
They stare into my eyes and ask
all over again
who?
Loved?
loved
Candlewitch
Wed, 2011-09-21 12:48
Dear Loved,
Return to us soon.
always, Cat
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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
loved
Thu, 2011-09-22 10:33
Shall
But from the darkened wilderness of time
i shall have to wait
albeit
yet return i shall though may be late
but I shall continue to hope
my friends will wait.
loved
loved
Candlewitch
Thu, 2011-09-29 11:18
Dear Loved,
Are you still having trouble getting back on? If so, I suggest you write to Hooded Stranger, or Andrew for help. Miss you!
always, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
loved
Sat, 2011-10-01 12:40
thanks
was slighly indisposed and busy in meditation
shall revert asap
regards all well wishers
loved
loved
Mon, 2011-10-03 10:51
yeah I am back but with lesser zeal yet............
Lost memory
Who are you they ask,
silently,
with a choked voice,
I reply
‘tis I,
yeah, me...
you once knew
Loved.
They stare into my eyes and ask
all over again
who?
Loved?
loved