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Perfect Pick

Submitted by Clentin on Sun, 2023-03-19 18:57

My life
Exists today
Because of my partner
Who accepted my love that day
When asked

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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Clentin

Mon, 2023-03-20 06:01

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Thank you.
I have and can be really happy even after all the years have passed

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Rosewood Apothecary

Mon, 2023-03-20 10:05

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I needed a place that felt like a home I could grow in. She has been that for 19 years. You said it perfectly.

Super job,
Tim

Clentin

Mon, 2023-03-20 10:21

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Thank you for reading. Y porms.
For me it is 55

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Rosewood Apothecary

Mon, 2023-03-20 10:29

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That’s amazing longevity! love that for you both! Great work caring for each other. It gives me a lot of hope in humanity knowing you’re out there being kind to the best of your abilities and also being forgiving. It takes that kind of mentality to have a go at life with someone for 50+ years. I congratulate you both. I’m a romantic and this is so sweet.

Thanks for sharing
Tim

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