The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Our Actions" effectively utilizes a consistent rhyme scheme (ABAB) and a clear, straightforward language to convey its message about the importance of our actions and decisions in life. The use of the metaphor of a "ripple effect" is a strong image that helps to illustrate the poem's central theme.

However, the poem could benefit from a more varied use of poetic devices. For instance, the use of similes, alliteration, or personification could add depth and texture to the poem, making it more engaging for the reader.

The poem's message is clear and universal, but it could be made more specific or personal. Providing concrete examples or personal anecdotes could make the theme more relatable and impactful for the reader.

The rhythm of the poem could also be improved. Currently, the lines vary in length and syllable count, which can disrupt the flow of the poem. A more consistent rhythm could enhance the reading experience.

Lastly, the poem's conclusion could be strengthened. The final stanza reiterates the poem's central theme, but it does not add a new insight or perspective. A more powerful or unexpected ending could leave a lasting impression on the reader.

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Hello, Clentin,
Very wise words! I do sense that your poetry tends to "tell" the reader your message. I agree with AI to perhaps add a more specific or personal touch, pulling us in a bit more. Your message is universal and inspiring.
Thank you!
L