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My Prayer

O God!
Help the youth the truth to know
In four years fasting and rumbles
Living in an abject of poverty and tears
Great lofty pains attain
To build a nation where peace
And justice shall reign.

Help the youth the truth to know
In sorrow of slavery and humiliation
Under a nameless power
Great sadness attain
To build a nation where peace
And justice shall reign.

O God!
Help the youth the truth to know.

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Bravery comment!
I really appreciate your use of words.

"Words are currency of ideas and have the power to change world. Ride your pen on the rough road."

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