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E-motion
When you feel askew
wait and perform a review
to succeed anew.
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Success follows perseverance
Editing stage:
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Comments
Gunnar Hedlund
Fri, 2017-11-24 14:45
e-mail this to yourself...
...and there let it rest.
least that's what i've have averred
had i chance to eye this before
publishing.
it's as forced and as faked as every breath DT takes.
i've a great book for sale on e-bay, outlining the pleasures
of origami.
voile!
OriginalRhyku
Fri, 2017-11-24 21:40
Gunnar
Thanks for your honest review. I respect your right to your opinion.
Just a small correction - I think you meant to write voila, not voile.
voile
noun meaning: a thin, semi-transparent fabric of cotton, wool, or silk.
voila
exclamation meaning: there it is; there you are (French origin)
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