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Dreams
Images tied together with strings of hope
are but glimpses of the past renovated
to meet the demands of the future.
Minute pauses that bridge the gap of
reality with the unknown world of
tomorrow.
Today’s dreams are merely fragmented
reflections of one ‘s innermost being
transmitted through nerve fibers and
projected onto individual screens.
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2023-01-04 07:30
hello,
that is the best description I've heard yet. it bears investigation!
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Clentin
Wed, 2023-01-04 09:42
Thank you. I am new to this
Thank you. I am new to this site and am not sure if what I should do etc. still exploring.
author commentCandlewitch
Wed, 2023-01-04 10:22
exploring
is the best thing to do...it shows that you belong here! welcome!
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Clentin
Wed, 2023-01-04 11:01
Thank you. I am new at this
Thank you. I am new at this and am not sure how to use this site in the fullest.
I would like to speak to someone to best utilize this site.
author commentCandlewitch
Wed, 2023-01-04 15:44
dear Clentin,
basically, write a poem, post it and go read other poems and comment/critique them (note rudely) to be of help to other poets. when you receive comments, respond to them. you can enter contests, too or join workshops to learn different styles of poetry. if you need help just ask a advocate and they will help you. have an enjoyable time here.
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Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2023-01-04 16:30
Dreamy
There are two layers. The language itself conveys a dreamlike state yet I feel like we are speaking more about aspirations. Either way, it’s very good.
Tim
Give the site a little time. I’ve been here for a few and I’m still navigating it. We are glad to have to here posting such wonderful stuff.
Lavender
Wed, 2023-01-04 20:42
Dreams
Hello, Clentin,
I am not completely certain of your intent, but your poem reminds me of a book I've read called The Four Agreements which professes that our lives are dreams created by society and the rules of our cultures much more than our own individual personal talents and desires. I am curious to read your response. Very introspective! The second stanza is especially thoughtful.
Thank you!
L
Rosewood Apothecary
Thu, 2023-01-05 05:10
That’s interesting
I’ll have to check that out.