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Like Hitting A Wall
There are so many poets
to deep to tread.
You get into the moment
but then loose the thread
The purpose looses meaning
The meaning has no depth.
Like a needle in a haystack,
you can't find the head.
You go back to the start
like hitting a wall.
You're more lost
the second time through.
You give up on the poem,
that's all you can do.
My message to you.
The deeper you go
Give your poetry motion
so everything flows.
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Crofton Maryland USA
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I have always loved poetry but sad to say I haven't really gotten into, individual poets. I truly believe that it is never to late to learn and appreciate others. That is one of the reasons I am here today.
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weirdelf
Fri, 2017-01-20 13:51
Is this a poem or a blog?
If a blog, please say what you mean,
Please do not post poems as blogs.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Chef Don
Fri, 2017-01-20 17:37
You just don't see it
Sorry Jess, I can't be any more blunt
If you can't see the meaning
Your not reading my stuff
See my work is more than a poem
It flows like the ocean
but never gets rough
See a poem should have motion
that shouldn't be tough
author commentweirdelf
Fri, 2017-01-20 17:56
"The blog feature is not a separate entity for you to post poems
in order to beat the imposed daily limit. Poems should be posted only in the stream or in a workshop."
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines
My point was not whether it was a blog or poem, sorry, I was unclear.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Chef Don
Sat, 2017-01-21 11:02
It's a blog that rymes
The blog is to state how some poets have no style
and truly make no sense and discourages the
average reader from enjoying their work.
I am new to this site and have found many
poems that need serious help. It's like being lost in
the dark on a windy night and all that I have is a
candle with one match. I guess I have to learn what
a blog is. My thought is a blog sends a message
while promoting my talents as a writer, it's a journal
for the public to view my thoughts and if I want it to
be in a poetic style like my personal journals are
then that's how it will be
author commentChef Don
Sat, 2017-01-21 11:09
Poetry to Novels
Hi, this is Don and I have been in the culinary field most of my life. In the past few years
I have turned to my writing. I have a series of books coming out and the first one is called
"The Real Deal Is Love" I'll be hoping for you as fellow artist to take a look and give me your feed back.
Donald R. Bosch
author commentweirdelf
Sat, 2017-01-21 12:19
Glad you are so willing to help and are so fully informed
on what a blog is.
I'm sure you will magnanimously inform us all in every aspect of poetry and literature.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
weirdelf
Mon, 2017-01-30 08:19
Sorry, I was rude.
I know you are trying to help.
And I'm sure you have.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry