Pipiabarn_Chet

Member since June 1, 2023

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Endless Moments in the Waiting Room

Posted Sep 18, 2023 · 12 lines · 1 critiques

In the sterile room,
Fleeting whispers dance,
Silence speaks volumes,
As minutes stretch, prance.

"Will time ever mend,
The clock's ceaseless cry?"
Frustration takes hold,
Time drips with a sigh.

Longing for solace,
Amidst restless minds,
Patience wears thin,
Anxious heart unwinds.

Pipiabarn_Chet’s timeline

June 2024
01 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
September 2023
18 Mon

Posted a poem
Endless Moments in the Waiting Room
"In the sterile room,"
Open thread 12 lines
13 Wed

Received a critique
on cityscape from @Lavender
"Hmm... I'm not certain what you are referring to, but a major way to communicate on the site is to read and comment on other poets' work. This helps build the community while also learning more about poetry. Thank you, L"
11 Mon

Received a critique
on cityscape from @Lavender
"I love reading and writing poetry. This site has offered a non-judgmental learning experience for me. I feel encouraged and inspired by many of the poets, and have enjoyed both critiquing and submitting poetry. To me, p…"
10 Sun

Received a critique
on cityscape from @Lavender
"Such a beautiful poem. I especially love these stanzas: "medley of urban odors..." and "park benches sit patiently..." Somehow, the city is breathing and alive, and still reflective and at rest - all in the same moment…"
09 Sat

Posted a poem
cityscape
"the city sits, breathless, smog-heavy across endless asphalt and tires,"
Open thread 53 lines
June 2023
19 Mon

Received a critique
on Unbounded Resilience from @Geezer
"that Triskelion is correct. I found this to be quite good, and as I suspect that you have a bit of difficulty with being mobile and able, I would guess that you are worried that you will not be able to write much longer…"
18 Sun

Received a critique
on Unbounded Resilience from @Triskelion
"I am not well versed in the structure and intricacies of the villanelle, this sure appears to be just that. (Correct me where I am wrong) it seems that S1,5and 6 each need to have a line broken to bring the structure in…"
18 Sun

First publication
Unbounded Resilience
18 Sun

Posted a poem
Unbounded Resilience
"I stand, a poet with a spirit unbound, Within the depths of a disability's hold."
Open thread 16 lines
01 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 17 days later.

About Me

About me

Concetta Pipia is a poetess and writer who is published in several International anthologies and e-literary magazines. She is a certified well life coach and loves dogs and horticulture. My favorite poets are Sylvia Plath and Walt Whitman. Ms. Pipia is looking at her life since a milestone Birthday places her in her seventh decade. With encouragement, she hopes to publish a book of poetry expressed as a memoir.

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Endless Moments in the Waiting Room

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Endless Moments in the Waiting Room

on cityscape from @Lavender

on cityscape from @Lavender

on cityscape from @Lavender

cityscape

on Unbounded Resilience from @Geezer

on Unbounded Resilience from @Triskelion

Unbounded Resilience

Unbounded Resilience

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Endless Moments in the Waiting Room

cityscape

Unbounded Resilience

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