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don't ever read this

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2017-03-30 03:14

do not read me
'coz 'twill be a total disappointment
for thee
as I am a
free style
crap
junk
machine gun poet
a gem
I produce in a million

if every poetry was to be like a pearl
I would have earned a billion
I have none

But I am a patient of patience
humble to nude
nakedness

what I mostly compose is crap/scrap
says my master jess
you may support him
I confess
I will never progress...
EIGHTH grade* generation
me
*read decade if you wish

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Sparrow

Thu, 2017-03-30 19:37

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I shall not read this piece.
Please talk to us in reason
Don't dwell on your dissatisfaction
There in the anger,
it brings is a loss of words,
that cannot be strung together
Write those things
we beseech you to write
Clear concise poetic words
Strunk together as a symphony of life
Know that we love you young Bard
But would love you more
if you wrote poetry from that heart you hide,
Yours as always, Ian..

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Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

lovedly

Thu, 2017-03-30 23:04

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if you wrote poetry from that heart you hide,>>>>>>>>

yes in my own stride
thanks my once and still GUIDE
Ian

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