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timelessness of time

sorry for butting in,
if i may be permitted to,
as a scientist more
than a toddler poet,
daring to tread through
the poetic treadmill,
besides stalwarts,
not knowing much of the nuances of poetry,
none the less,
I may continue,
if you do permit

firstly,
i may suggest,
we all read the book on time
brief history of time
by Stephen Hawkins

secondly,
science and spirituality are at variance.
science is mathematical vision,
like the actual fact the earth
wobbles around the sun
the number of full moons one sees,
in a life time,
subscribe to the basic element of time
scientifically adopted,
from sunrise to sunrise
and
today the zodiac,
which is over 2000 years old
ensures the return of the sun,
having moved up from cancer
down to the tropic of Capricorn,
and back
which is not at all cyclic?
also GMT was introduced
about 100years ago,
when air travel came to life

as far as spiritualism is concerned,
I'm hardly anybody to comment,
but all spirituality should be reserved,
for afterlife,
when we all are safely deposited in heaven
on terra firma let’s be pragmatic human beings,
all poets are a part of existentialism.

hope my intrusion,
justifies my intention,
of not intruding in the domain,
where I continue to
an infant,
a baby still remain

Comments

U r not only a fatalist but
A great person
You have had a tiring youth,
I am aware
And you have brought up kids all your life.
I know that
And
You are a great poet,
We all know that
And
You are finally getting married,
The whole world knows that
And
You are the best
INTERNET FRIEND I HAVE here,
I want all to know that.

This article was an inspiration
From Weird... s article
And I kept on writing.
Being fairly well educated
And
Having studied 20000 plus folks

Somehow I can't accept
What I just can't.
I didn't deem it appropriate
To post this article there
As it would appear as a scam
So I put it into a blog.
I know many won't read it,
But I gave vent to my inner self.
Glad you stand by me,

I also believe in faith,
But not totally

As we are bound by
Environment
Heredity
And
Circumstantial factors

We can change our lives at will,
If we are prepared to accept failure,
As our own doing
Be responsible of your own actions,
Then recline and bask in the glory of fate.
Albeit!

FROM THE LOVED ONE

loved

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to be a very useful invention
to prevent everything from happening all at once.
Not all of us are skilled at multi-tasking
or slipping in and out of multiple awareness
:-)

__________________________________________________
'write on! let these words free.'

This time,
I ought to disagree.
Time is not an invention,
It’s a creation,
Anticipation,
Exhilaration
An essentialist reality
Of the fact
That time alone exist.
We don't more than
The life of a bubble
Hope that you will accept,
It’s high time
We all did.

loved

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friend cryptic and shirley again
only two regular friends i have here
u r so very much
2222222222222
deer

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If you ask of me the world and I give you a smile and a thought of unconditional love then we are both blessed.the one and only one IAN

loved

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Time exists
a process physical
regardless of belief
or theory.
No time means
no change
no change means
no reality
no reality means
nothing.

Respectfully, Race

"Laws and Rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" - Race-9togo

http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/Race_9togo

Time alone exists
We are simply specks
Of time
Minuscule at the least
Human beast

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the creation of time
has birthed the joy
and the angst
of anticipation
and the dread
of obliteration
yet one suspects
this exhilaration
and nervous tension
is found within
each feeling person
regardless of where
the hands of time
may lay at any moment.
thus time may as well
be seen as a static
entity... a sentinel
without colour or creed
and only laughs at
the flattery we give
by the power we
seem to it accord.
It potency lies in fact
that it remains when
all else has faded
quite timeless.

__________________________________________________
'write on! let these words free.'

THAT IS THE BASIC PRINCIPLEThe books of stephen hawkins are as much as explicit as i had observed a few years ago that the fourth dimention thus is time in life
is and was and will be TIME

HENCE UR RECONSIDERATION please.

thus time may as well
be seen as a static
entity... a sentinel?????????????????

loved

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time can never and will never stand still
it is a universal constant whether we observe
or follow it clocks and timers and seasons
I understand the Hawkins proposition
but to me time does nothing but ensure
the succession of moments - it is us that
make the most of our time and in the venue
of time produce great deeds or infamy.
Time in that sense is a grand stage
and we the players in this drama.
When we are late, it is not time's fault
When we are early, time does not get offended
time will forget the day and moment we were born
and when we die, time continues on without us
except for the flame of our memory which our
friends and loved ones would carry on in the
venue of time... that is what I meant by
time being static and a sentinel...
Time makes no moral judgements
it doesn't make excuses or hand out bonuses
time continues whether we flow with it or
choose to remain behind
time does not pick sides or choose
it just is. and will always be. :-)

__________________________________________________
'write on! let these words free.'

with due authority
so quickly

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when the head is light
and time is right

loved

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there was a plodder named Einstein
did a lot to define time's line
reached into his bag of tricks
discovered time was not fixed

Time accelerates as we turn old
due to reference I'm told
but almost halts with a sweet kiss
something here must be amiss

a watched clock will barely move
OK that's something I can't prove
yet 50 years can seem so short
a singe cell on time's huge wart

by the way I enjoyed this poem of yours loved..............scribbler

Time accelerates as we turn old
due to reference I'm told
but almost halts with a sweet kiss
something here must be amiss

Einstein Must Be Trying,
To Send a Sms to You

You prove his
Theory of relativity
As true.

He said this
Quote

When a girl sits on your laps,
For two hours,
It’s like just a second.

And
When you touch a hot cauldron,
For just half a second,
It’s like two hours.
Unquote

That’s all there is to time,
All is relative
That’s all to it,
But time can't stand still
Can it?

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Time stand still? They have theorized that at a black hole's event horizon it may appear to stand still to an outside observer.........................scribbler

Here's a thought - time is movement ( protons, atoms, earth rotating around the sun. etc ) without movement would time exsist?

Just a quicky because I'm going out - I'll look you up latter.

Interesting subject, interesting poem.

Love Mand xxxxxxxxx

know

and
then alone time will show
its true singular path
and no colour
till then let time go slow

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I love the subject of time and space, ( that what come's of being a trekky ).lol My "time" is filled up with to much movement, I'm off out again in half an hour, I manage to snatch moments of time to read and sometimes comment. Lol

I loved your poem

Love Mand xxxxxx

hour lapsed a week ago
whatever
OR HOW SO EVER

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.

Everything to my mind is evolutionary once an

Organism integrated with another and another and yet another,
The final man evolved,
The shape of the present man is not yet absolutely final,
Electromagnetry mechochemically,
Will change the present mankind’s name
And
Man will still continue to invent,
Now we know its nano time,
Tomorrow’s time
Is any ones guess?
Including mine

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Hey U.

Time was not relative, so to speak, until the *concept* (word) was spoken (whether by grunts, facial expressions or body movements, or great works that have been lost or kept for posterity) .

*Loved* I read you on occasion. For me the problem is that you submit so much and you use the blog for posting your poetry which is a tad underhanded...in essence thumbing your nose at the one-poem-per day. You do this time and time again.

;-D

So, I'll post my variation on the theme of time and words in a blog, too. You might read it or you might not.

~A

IS THERE A RULE THAT I'M DISOBEYING?

in any case i haven't posted one today

nor will i the whole week

so have your way

i shall stay out of ur way

hopefully

also NO COMMENTS BY THE SIDE WAY

OK HEY YOU

OK ,
Ma'am would be politer and respectable
than roughly calling one as

TOM DICK AND HARRY
HEY YOU What ????

we must respect every one including u and me

lovelyhoney

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that i am disobeying

in any case i haven't posted one today

nor will i the whole week

so have your way

i shall stay out of ur way

hopefully

also NO COMMENTS BY THE SIDE WAY
OK HEY YOU

OK Ma'am would be politer and respectable

than roughly calling one as

TOM DICK AND HARRY
HEY YOU

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hey U refers to a song by pink floyd.... one of my favourites.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gELhNbDcLE0

And it refers to time. Life....the need to connect.

~A

LOVELY MUSIC ITS PLAYING NOW HOPE U 2 CAN HEAR IT THANX

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corrrected

.As per the unchallenged theory of and by Einstein

ALL IS RELATIVE

AND THE TIME SPECIALIST
SECOND TO ME
IS STEPHEN HAWKINGS
ALL KNOW IT .
THANKS

Time and tide waits for no man
So said the wizard
Shakespeare

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Last Night
A car rolled passed me
on my right
on the expressway
last night
when I say rolled,
I do mean rolled
over on on its side,
over and over
the streelight that it hit
flailing at it
like some giant hand
as it rolled along
disintegrating.
In my car
doing sixty
I could see this rolling car
through my passenger window
on the right
like looking at clothing
tumbling
in a front-load drier
no farther away
than my outstretched hand
barely twelve inches from my car.
The velocity and momentum
the spinning of that car,
the downing of that streetlamp
are all of science,
of velocity, momentum,
friction and time;
my being untouched
by hurtling death
unlooked-for
from a racing car
behind me?
that's the gods
putting hands into my life
saying :Not yet, not yet."
Tell me,
which is better?

Respectfully, Race

"Laws and Rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" - Race-9togo

http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/Race_9togo

Time as we have made it, tic, tock, tic, tock, cannot be a dimension it is purely a man made thing for us to measure with, would you say a ruler is a dimension, or a jug with lines on to say how much liquid in, is a dimension.

Someone needs to rethink this measuring thing and separate it from reality.

The fourth dimension must be something along the lines of relative position, or some such thing we just cannot fathom (Using a 6 foot measure)...

Our minds are so small in the way 's of the whole universe and beyond that we have to make things with a limit, so that we can explain everyday things.
Life and our ultimate change is measured if we lived for ever there would be no need to measure a lifespan, and many other things we have created a dimension for..

Is there a parallel universe travelling alongside us, is there an after world where we revert back to an energy pattern, can our thoughts take our own energy through that portal to the afterlife, is there a pattern to it all ???

Where are the children and people I talk to, they say there is no time there where they are
And the whole thing is run by the energy and unconditional love ???

I have asked many questions of their ways and I am happy with the result and at the moment can't find the words to portray their ways with the feelings they give to me.
Maybe this is an impossible task but I will keep trying to write of them, or their place, but it changes as they think, what a concept, La La
Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

are, the BRAIN CHILD of time,
everything is relative,
the number of full moons one does transit,
through a life's sojourn,
the number of sun rises
at the equator since 7000 years ago slated,
all give relative notions,
to the fourth dimension
we all and you too do,
call time.

Take the discourse a bit further,
some last much longer
many can’t even eject
the meaning of what I conceal,
hope you do get
or else how in the cauldron of time,
we, you and I and the rest
will ever beget,
if the in-escapability
of the relativity of motion,
we may call time, we forget.

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My Spirit friend Sadie was talking to me one day and I asked a question about someone. There was a delay, and then she came back with the answer.
I said to her, I thought that there was no time in her world.
She replied to me "I had to ask a few questions of others that's why there was a delay" and just laughed at my inability to understand about NO time.
I am going to that timeless zone called sleep now so enjoy the rest of your day it is only relevant to my sleep lol zzz Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Even sleep has an element of time,
for you just awake after a
slumber
and
then you enter a no time zone
if you don't awake

Till then sleep and awake
as usual,
till slumber does over take,
then you enter the timelessness zone
and
about that there is no mistake.

Till then sleep
and
if you desire awake
then when Sadie is ready
she will come
and
you she’ll take.

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ere i select it for all to read
thanks

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We should keep this one going until infinity grabs it into oblivion..
I think in the now, am I not physical, are we physical???
I think of the past, am I not your so called time, compressed as if it was nothing.
I think of the future, am I trying to be a God.
Yet all these things are in reality a type of now.
Even now is a fleeting thought that does not exist, to think of now is to try and fix a spot that never really exists, it is always being stretched or modified by our physical weakness.
Pure thought is timeless, and when we rejoin the energy of the Universes, there will be a beautiful silence a stillness that will let you find a peace in your thoughts for ever, or until you need to better your knowledge of all things reaching out for a purity that cannot be physical...
Some may think it is a black hole that they will fall into they maybe surprised...
If you get my drift, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

of my times
Some may think it is a black hole that they will fall into they maybe surprised...
If you get my drift, Yours Ian.T

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YOU need to scan Ok

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