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Flower Girl
Member since September 19, 2022
Member for 3 years, 8 months
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drops of heaven
A sense of calm, of hope and wonder
The silent calls, the beauty under
The laps that come between each breath
They glaze and shine into the depths
A single drop becomes another
And then a few to make a river
It settles in a pool of splendour
And sings the song of those most tender
Flower Girl’s timeline
- May 2026
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31 Sun
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23 Sat
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23 SatReceived a critique
on drops of heaven from @RJ Bear
"The cadence here is lovely. You’ve perfectly captured that quiet, wondrous magic of nature and renewal. Thanks for sharing this piece of peace! Regards Ray" -
21 ThuReceived a critique
on drops of heaven from @Geezer
"just a bit confused as to what the "laps" are. Do you mean lapses? This is lyrical, yet slightly ambiguous, I'm thinking that the "river" makes happy noises to settle in a back pool, and croon to those children of the m…" -
21 Thu
- January 2026
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09 Fri
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02 Fri
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01 ThuNew follower
@Leslie
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01 Thu
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01 Thu
- February 2024
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07 WedReceived a critique
on When I'm With You My Worries Fade Away from @scribbler
"I am with lavender as to the apparent length of this poem. But the length is Only apparent. I think it is the lack of stanzas which presents the reader with a visual "word wall" which makes it seem long. Now the stanzas…" -
07 WedReceived a critique
on When I'm With You My Worries Fade Away from @Lavender
"Hello, Flower Girl, At first read, I was thinking this was a bit too long. And then I read it a few more times. I don't know what would be taken out. It all escalates to that simple, but powerful last line, which sounds…" -
07 Wed
- September 2023
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19 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
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18 Mon
- June 2023
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21 WedPosted a poem
For Tomorrow
"Such fragility, such patience. We wait and wait until the shadows pull us in. In the blink of an eye, we become a memory. Forgotten by many, savoured by few. But those few cherish and levitate from our presence, collecting their tears into jars to be saved for us, building into a shrine of comfort and gratefulness. Though their shattered souls may be raw and exposed, we ripple through their currents, guiding them to be a better person tomorrow. No matter the time or distance, the clock continues to tick on, so embracing the love and warmth is all we have." -
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- May 2023
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26 Fri
- March 2023
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10 Fri
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04 Sat
- February 2023
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26 Sun
- January 2023
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05 ThuNew follower
@Alex Tanner
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04 Wed
- November 2022
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26 Sat
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11 Fri
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05 SatContest commendation
Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 30th to November 5th 2022
with "Invisible Walls".
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05 SatFirst contest commendation
Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 30th to November 5th 2022
with the poem "Invisible Walls".
- October 2022
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22 SatNew follower
@RoseBlack
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15 SatHighest posting month
October 2022 — 7 poems
- September 2022
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29 ThuNew follower
@Rosewood Apothecary
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19 MonFirst publication
Lost In Translation
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19 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
hi
Location: Brisbane, Australia
Favorite Poets
Emily Dickinson
Maya Hawke
Recent Work
I Am The Sun
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For Tomorrow
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Night Terror
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Wilt
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Okay
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Ceiling Crickets
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Devil Beneath the Dust
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Contest Wins
| Winning Submission | Contest | Contest Date |
|---|---|---|
| drops of heaven | Neopoet Weekly 05/17/26 to 05/23/26 | – |
| Ceiling Crickets | Neopoem Of The Week February 26th to March 4th 2023 | – |
| Invisible Walls | Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 30th to November 5th 2022 | – |