Use your words carefully because your words depending on which ones you use effects your tone .
And your tone effects the overall feel of your poem .

Well treat your poem like your building a wall every single brick or word has to contribute to the whole otherwise it would make no sense . why would you use that word if it contributes to nothing. It’s just like acknowledge a piano is there and then never use it .
The poem has to be like an arrow it has to have a point to pierce the message or idea into your readers head. Otherwise it won’t be that memorable and it won’t be effective.

Every poem every character I have written in my poems I usually see myself as them or they represent my ideas my fears my hopes.
Most of the poems I’ve written are sad or cynical. Well because I wrote those poems while in immense pain and
Through life I’ve gotten used to being alone so I yearned for a hand to hold and comfort me yet to afraid because I know nothing lasts forever but I just want something that would stay not fade away .
But that’s life it was and will never be gorgeousity .

So when they did the surgery they discovered that my tubing broke and I was having a csi leak.
So I got surgery in my head , chest and stomach.

Now the difference between the two is rhythm .
I’n poetry you have one set of rhythm and that is the syllables.
now I’m a song the rhythm of the syllables act as an acrobat trying to balance on a beam of a constant beat.

I’m going to have another brain surgery it will my sixth in these past two years . Because they believe that my shunt is over draining.

If tone effects rhythm then rhythm will effect the rhyming pattern because in poetry every thing is structured to build up to either and idea a point or an image which ever you want to hammer into your readers head. Now it depends tone
which want to rhyming the

chapter 2 the memories of marlowe

The night we met
by hayden mccain
chapter 1
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Her eyes like a sword pierced me
with an immense sense of purity .
She smiled timidly with her jaw subtly shaking.
She meekly murmured out the words “ h-h-hello you m-may call me Yolita“.
I smiled and softly sent back “ how do you do my name is Marlowe “.
she replied “I’m im d-doing ok-kay I’m j-j-just nervous
yes nervous ” .
I responded “ nervous about what? if you don’t mind me asking”.
She paused for a moment

Now the difference is simple but complex.
For poetry your rhythm is syllables
and the pacing .
While in a song the syllables act like an
Acrobat trying to balance on a beam
of constant beat .
While still trying to morph into a
matching melody