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Trujillo
Member since April 14, 2026
Member for 1 month, 21 days
Ode Poem
Oh an ode to my love
From the day we just met to the day you said be mine
You made me smile for so long and uncontrollably
The time we spend together I could only wish it would last forever
Your unconditional love draws me towards you and without a thought I follow
It is the way you look at me with those beautiful eyes that make me over joyed when I see you
The moments when you listen to me whether it's day or night make me feel so loved
The way you show me light when i am surrounded by darkness
The times you talk about me with so much love when you are surrounded by others
Oh these qualities of you that I so adore
When I gaze upon you, from head to toe, I see something that belongs above
The way I see you can't be seen by no one, because I see you from within
From your big eyes, ravishing skin, and dark hair, it creates a picture of unmatched beauty
The way you talk and your accent brings into the light I can't hear anything more soothing
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Oh the way walk so tall as if you couldn't care of anything else in the world but me
No matter where you go, no matter where I am, your presence lingers, like a guiding star.
No regrets, no date, no time to rue, for our paths intertwined, and you're always on my mind
There is no date, place or time when I seem to regret meeting you
For you have brought joy into my life, one that I yearn to forever hold close
Oh the troubles in my life, but you seem not to take part in any
Oh, the love you give, so pure and true, It draws me closer, every day anew.
I can't imagine time without your grace, You've shaped my world, my happy place.
You show me warm from inside, I can't imagine a life without this feeling
I do not regret crossing paths with you the time we met, for you, my dear, I'll never forget.
Oh an ode to my dear loved one
Trujillo’s timeline
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16 ThuReceived a critique
on Tears or Rain? from @Obadiah Grey
"I prefer this to your other post, though, enjoyed both. Obi." -
16 ThuReceived a critique
on Tears or Rain? from @Obadiah Grey
"I'd listen to this bloke, he's surprisingly knowledgeable ! Obi." -
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15 WedReceived a critique
on Tears or Rain? from @Geezer
"confused with the main consideration of this poem. After reading through a couple of times, I found that your remarks in the 'Last Word' cleared things up. I would choose some different words to being wetted by the rain…" -
14 TueFirst publication
Tears or Rain?
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14 TueJoined Neopoet
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About Me
I consider myself adaptable, accountable, and patient, which helps me manage my responsibilities and support others. Im posting poems in hope of earning some money to pay off some tution
Location: USA
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