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Life Jackets

Every morning, when both our dogs wrestle
to jump in my lap to say hello. When you smile at me
with forgiveness for not noticing your hair,
which you just had done. Calling me out of the blue,
asking me if I wanted something from the smoothie place.

All of these things keep our home tethered to the surrounding shore,
so that it’s not washed away in a maelstrom of complacency.
I consider these gifts all the time, and they rescue me every day.

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Grateful every day!
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Yes, Michael!
Wonderful title! Life is good!
L

It is! Thanks for stopping by L!

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Michael Anthony

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how I feel about my life and wife. She will often make a special effort to purchase something that I enjoy when she goes shopping. Such a little thing, but so gratifying to know that she thinks of me especially. I make sure that I thank her with kisses and doing the dishes, LoL
I love the title! ~ Geez.
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I hear you Geez! The little things often speak the loudest. Appreciate your thoughts on this piece.

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Michael Anthony

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I like it. It's warm with a rush of oxytocin!

The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!

Thank you Leslie!

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Michael Anthony

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