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Song of Anger
I have aged
For so long
In the cage
Of self rage
Life like hell
Anger eats me
Hard to tell
Friend from foe.
In my eyes
Rolling like dice
Any side faced
Life is woe
Head to toe
Anger without choice
Has made me
Mad at everything
Raged at anything
Calmed by nothing
Can’t help it
The growling anger
Worst of all
Angry at myself
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Barbara Writes
Fri, 2012-03-16 01:12
beautiful rhythm
Sums up my anger when trying to socialize with the wrong people. Lol
Except I release the beast on the one taunting me as I cower in a corner.
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WonderGolly
Fri, 2012-03-16 08:02
Hello Barbara
Thank you very much for the read and your kind words. I appreciate it.
And thank you for welcoming me into neopoet. glad to be a part.
respects.
WonderGolly :)
respects.
WonderGolly
What I love most about POETS is how they write SADNESS with SUNSHINE on their face, caption RAIN with FALLEN EMBERS and paint TEARS using the colours of WATERFALLS:lol
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Fri, 2012-03-16 07:28
Hello Barbara
Thank you very much for the read and your kind words. I appreciate it.
And thank you for welcoming me into neopoet. glad to be a part.
respects.
WonderGolly :)
respects.
WonderGolly
What I love most about POETS is how they write SADNESS with SUNSHINE on their face, caption RAIN with FALLEN EMBERS and paint TEARS using the colours of WATERFALLS:lol
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