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your time blows in the wind

spread your hands
like you own the skies. speak like thunder and
let the rain fall. act the script.
own the world; even hakuna matata happened
when all animals bowed to simba.

your's is coming.
take the step helon habila took on plateau plains
of purple hibiscus: chimamanda's silver lining
and aprons round your waist
and big one on israel adesanya's shoulder.
all will wait till your time comes. for now
it blows in the winds. it will come.

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This is a motivational poem to encourage everyone to keep the dream alive. To keep pushing and learn from others' success stories.
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Very profound piece. Just some suggestions, beginning with all your stanzas capitalize the first letter. Capitalize each word in the title. Where you end with a full stop capitalize the next letter. Overall a heroic piece for people to find the courage within themselves and willed it into themselves.

Candice Vitalien
"Keep glowing even if no one can see your light.
For among the hidden stars on the darkest night
Someone will look up and behold
The flickering hope; words untold;
Strength and Honour my Warriors! "

Thank you Warrior Princess for checking in on my poem. Well, this is an attempt on style different from the norm. Glad the message resonated with you.

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A great message, that resonates with everyone. No matter how small or large the task, keep the faith! ~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Thanks Geezer. Appreciate your comments. Life happens. We get up and keep building.

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