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Your Smile is Intoxicating
Your smile is exotic
it's intoxicating
it sends swift currents
down my bent spine
straightens many a thing
which at my age become
sans
Still I love to watch our smile
so very fragile
it's wild and n the forests of darkness
where there is no sun
your blushes ignite the dried up leaves
autumn is coming
I can see
will you smile with me
rather more smile
will ye
blush~ blush I can see
waters trickling
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Triskelion
Thu, 2021-08-12 18:35
That's more like
the metaphor master I think of when I see the name lovedly.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Thu, 2021-08-12 21:47
kindness
Trisk
Geezer
Fri, 2021-08-13 08:51
Sooooo good!...
This one hits the spot! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Fri, 2021-08-13 10:37
THANKS GEE
ANOTHER POETRY POETESS SAID
It's abs professional my
had dog's ears
LOL