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you humble me!
You have produced some really good work here
and I know that you can do more. ~ Gee.
You light a flame
as we do in Churches and temples
lead kindly light my poet of distinction
but all my verses are off the cuff editions
Many times I've tried to improve
I take suggestions
as and when they come
but then it becomes like a synthetic concoction
yeah metaphorically
Let me know
where you can strike me with a stick
I will clear the forest of all the infested dicks
when good poets like you
want to teach me more than learn
I have read them and you as often
the poet's rainbows may bless you
as you wield a galaxy of glitter
you humble me!
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lovedly
Fri, 2017-04-14 13:08
thanks Audri for your... ''MAIDEN''...glitter
I shall amend as you say
also my master Jess says
don't exalt poets especially of Neo
in this case it couldn't be helped .
About additional stanzas
please add them too
'twill be lovely
coming from you
Audri
author commentlovedly
Fri, 2017-04-14 15:26
shall
await your revisit and hints may be
I love about 15 to 19 lines poetry
mostly
author commentwesley snow
Fri, 2017-04-14 16:51
You've written longer dear.
Hello.
I haven't seen you in a while. It is good to see you here. I have no suggestions for the poem save the title as mentioned. I still have trouble understanding your style at times, but that doesn't mean I don't read it.
I hope you are well.
W. H. Snow
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lovedly
Sat, 2017-04-15 14:19
I am a stylish... style-less poet Mr.Snow man
I am a stylish.... style-less poet Mr.Snow man
most of my poetry is trash
you know it
many surprise me
why they still do read me
I started composing acrostic poetry
since my school days
I thought I was very creative
when one of my siblings said
you write acrostic well
any one can tell
then I was exhorted
to compose poetry
by a guy some where in the American continent
he voiced and did convey
the methodology he followed
he fell by the pass way
I still continue till today
some say poet who
and I never betray
a ''silly''
poet me
they may say
no poetry
any two have any similarity
but I myself don't portray
jess says
do go your own way
of course you do produce gems
once in a way
when the sun sets without the forest
and it dawns another day
Lovedly 's poetry does say
come read me
if you wish to
as the twilight is born twice every day
Loved or Lovedly
any one(poet) can say
is not much of a mundane
routine poet
of those born
and
passed away
poets anyway
but we love and pray
some day
one day
some explosive
GEM
poetry
will blast his life away
some day
one day
may it be
May day!
author commentwesley snow
Sat, 2017-04-15 15:13
Of course you are a poet.
With a style all your own (despite what Jess may say), but I would love to see you write in a more structured way that you might be better understood. Too much of what you produce is stream of consciousness.
You can do better, but never change your style.
W. H. Snow
A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley
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lovedly
Sat, 2017-04-15 15:21
I can't say I shall abide
I can't say I shall abide
but
one can never straighten
a dogs tail
even if a dog did try
But that's no reason why
I can't compose structured poetry
I did
so many I did compose
but I suffered a nauseating feeling
of mundanity
why write such meaningless poetry
But then I may be poles apart
and flowing all over like a dart
yes poetry is very much
of me an integral part
I may not know
the finesse of art
as a poet
I am an upstart
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