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WOWLY Poetree
Beauty of a poem lies
not when its posted
but painted
in the minds of many
who devote time and imagery
trying to trace the poet's mind
else the poem needs
a fresher brush stroke
to others passion evoke
that's my take
of this lovely poems
more shall assemble
hopefully to read em
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
I have observed ..thousands post poems but hardly many or any are read ...So all to post DREAD
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Fri, 2022-07-08 03:46
dear lovedly,
many poet's poems don't get read because many of those poets don't read and comment/critique on other poets work. you get what you give...think on that.
favorite lines:
else the poem needs
a fresher brush stroke
to others passion evoke
that's my take
of this lovely poems
*love, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Fri, 2022-07-08 12:00
Thank you
I learnt it long ago when a poetess like you
advised me so
now years ago
Thanks Cats