This is wonderful! Full of enjoyment and love.
I really enjoyed it Lovedly.
Thanks for sharing such enjoyable work.
Much appreciate it.

exquisite poetry my dear! I think this is your best poem ever! this is worthy of Great poetry!

* hugs & love, Cat

Nice rhyming and not too enigmatic. [Are you alright]? Many good wishes for the New Year my friend, ~ Geez.
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Hello, Lovedly,
Elegant, and a beautiful call to love in all forms.
Lav

Here’s my take; when I read your work I see a picture. There are focal points and movement, balance; like visual art. Your poetry is visual. It does have a certain rhythm to it that seldom feels forced or abrupt and always seems to enhance the image.

You force the reader to create a story around an image. I suspect, like a good teacher, you’ve got your ideas but the reader as the student must form their own. It’s a huge part of your style and when it works for me it’s really provocative. On occasion I’m too tired and lazy for that style. Sometimes I want to be fed without having read the menu if that makes any sense. Pure laziness of course.

This one I like a lot.
Tim