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wounded

Submitted by Seren on Fri, 2013-11-08 08:21

In for repairs :)

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Sun, 2013-11-10 04:06

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Is it you that's in for repair or the Poem ???
Just thought I would ask.
Take care and know we are thinking of you,
Yours Ian, and Friends

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Seren

Sun, 2013-11-10 06:54

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Definitely the poem in for repair at the moment I am not doing too shabby :) the poem was not up to my standards I will work on it and consider reposting it

love always JC xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

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