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A Wistful Night

Submitted by Rula on Fri, 2022-10-28 15:09

My night;
a wicked witch
riding a crooked broom,

my dreams flew away

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Contest: 
Neopoem Of The Week October 23rd to October 29th 2022
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Fri, 2022-10-28 17:02

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Hello, Rula!
Darn! A wicked witch's worst nightmare! Maybe you can get the broom fixed by Halloween. Very clever poetry! I enjoyed this!
Thank you,
L

Rula

Sat, 2022-10-29 16:19

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Much appreciate the read and your kind comment.I too enjoyed writing these lines.

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RoseBlack

Fri, 2022-10-28 22:00

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Of riding a crooked broom. Perhaps the witch starts over on the next day and things look better. A simple yet meaningful write.

~RoseBlack~

Rula

Sat, 2022-10-29 16:25

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Always great to see a new friend on my page.
Your comment adds to my day and I too hope things to get better quie soon.
Thank you.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Seren

Mon, 2023-02-13 13:51

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I thought this was wickedly good.

Well done and congratulations on your win

Kind regards Jayne

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Rula

Tue, 2023-02-14 15:33

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I'm so pleased you're back.
I can't thank you enough for reading these lines and for commenting.
I'm not sure about winning, but I am thankful anyway.
Looking forward to reading some of your poetry soon dear.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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