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WISDOM COMES to Some
You must all compose
fewer poems
within reach of jokers like me
who just want to be read only
this lesson a girl gave me
no one read my poetry
for three years
not a single comment
till the poetess
finally did sense cement
O poet
you are lovely
but no one comments on thee
why
read 10 poems of mine
then perhaps
I may spare a line
Now take this lesson of hers
for me
she passed away
into the wilderness
of poetic melody
Today all read me
I'm no more lonelier
than was she
indebted to
her indelible
memory I be
God be with her
where ever she's
finally cast a poet
out of a cracked coconut
you call
a poetic butt!
Ah Lovedly
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
lovedly
Mon, 2020-12-07 11:58
thanks
a fairy she be
Geezer
Tue, 2020-12-08 07:37
As enigmatic...
as ever! There is much more to Lovedly than is seen at first glance. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Tue, 2020-12-08 11:51
MY DEAREST GEE
Lovely
Lovedly's thanks
you honour most
rgds
AND
bows