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Winter surprise

Winter surprise
Faint sunrise
Hope beyond

Loving days
Beyond time
Two hearts meld

Conquers all
Day by day
Forever

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Hello, CrazyMary!
A brief, but joyful poem! I adore the feeling of appreciation, the wonder of surprise enduring the magic of the darkest of seasons with "another heart."
Thank you!
L

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