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The Wind of Change... Unofficial entry Serious Limerick workshop

Submitted by Geezer on Sat, 2014-11-08 19:00

Politics is a religion
Unless you play, stop your bitchin'

There's not one who cares if you don't
So it matters not if you won't

But there's nothing that we'd rather see
Than someone windward taking a pee

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words: 
I know that I am not officially a part of this workshop, but I couldn't resist!
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft

Comments

raj

Sun, 2014-11-09 12:55

I suggest you read about the structure of a limerick , which is posted by Jess in the Workshop theme and he has also provided some examples.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

raj

Sun, 2014-11-09 13:56

Also please read "Full Metal Limericks" posted by Jess in stream for examples.

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

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