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Why Only at Night am I so Bright
I keep thinking
how Gee will be feeling
pulling my legs
only at night
my brain is flushed
mind is plushed
thoughts of the next moment
some one like usual
will come
and say
how aboutnow
tonight
'tis time
put off the lights
you appear so lovedly bright
let's spend the night
no not in bed
its too warm
let's hasten towards the storm
ere a new dawn is born
and our child
we will have to name
her as Dawn
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Ekaterina Alexa...
Thu, 2023-03-02 04:13
Aaaagh-MAZ---ING!!!
Hi Lovedly! This poem is absolutely amazing! I think it's one of my favourite one of yours. That final stanza is brilliant. Well done Xxx
lovedly
Thu, 2023-03-02 07:43
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
Since u have come I am looking to be a mountain what rat no poet lol
lovedly
Mon, 2023-03-06 07:53
Helloooo Geeeeeeeeeee
What is the significance of GREEN BACK GROUND lol