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Why not Appreciate Creative God revised

Praise thy woman
at length

God will be happy
as he has created
so many more women

yours is the first exception
he took time to chisel

Wonderful
beautiful
lovely woman

a life of a handsome
man

ask god
how much time he took
to make a poet
romantic one
out of you

a daring love couple
are you
god smiles
in appreciation
of both of you

why don't you two
also so do....

Style / type: 
Free verse
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God as inadequate worker churning out many models of femininity until he gets one right.

Keith Logan
the happy chappy
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as if God is
HUMAN
all Lords are

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