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WHY, LORD WHY?

Sitting alone again
Under A midnight sky
Stars surround and illuminate
The questions in my mind
Can I judge another
without asking the question why
Why does he walk the way he walks?
And why at times does she cry out,
with a broken sigh?
Are all of his bridges burning
Have her rivers all run dry
A thought for conjecture
To capture within my heart
Maybe I have assumed too much
Can I alone rely
Upon my own intelligence
To judge this man
In his seeming indolence
Or should I try
To take upon me
His very own heart
And bless him with a smile
It’s not always as we
Suppose it to be
Our minds twisted, wrapped up
In the green mile?
Take perhaps a moment
To delve into the divine
Surely we will find
The proof that we need
To forget and forgive
An obligation never to be denied!

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I want to say firstly every time I see you name it makes me think of my nightsky, I am slightly obsessed with the night I write about it quite often, my name Seren means star.

Your poem is magnificent the self-reflection, the putting yourself into another heart space and thoughts is just amazing, the only thing I would do is remove the double spacing then it would be perfection Imo!

Bravo!!!

Kind Regards Seren

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Perfection.

;)

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

GRATEFUL FOR YOUR KIND REMARKS! BEAUTIFUL NAMES OFTEN BELONG TO BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE.

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GRATEFUL FOR YOUR KIND REMARKS! BEAUTIFUL NAMES OFTEN BELONG TO BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE.

The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!

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Will someone please message me as to how I can delete the duplicate above. My memory
doesn't serve me as well as it used to.

The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!

author comment

Double spacing can be effective in the right circumstance but when you're reading a poem especially when one-line flows into the next I find it off-putting to have to read down in that pause it takes something away from it Imo.

Everyone is different though and that's the joy of Neopoet we are allowed to be ourselves no matter where we come from and who we are.

Seren x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

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