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WHY DID I LOVE YOU ( August contest)

What caught my initial gaze
was eyes of deepest emerald green.
I didn't hardly see much else
as I fell into them.

Next came that cheerful lilting laugh
which rang out often through the day
and matched perfectly the happy voice
released by diminutive form

I soon learned the perfect fit
we made when we came together
and my fingers ran through that fine hair
with the perfume of summer love

All these thing from long ago
tell of why I once loved you

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
I'm not much at free verse so don't laugh TOO hard
Editing stage: 
Contest: 

Comments

Boy...that was double quick!
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raj (sublime_ocean)

Don't tell anybody but I get advance intelligence on what each contest is about lol......stan

author comment

is it free style
looks like sonnetly to me

No rhyme-check, varied rhythm- check..........only thing sonnets is the fact that last two lines are in their own stanza but that is the result of line limitation and me not being able to wrap things up in 12 lines lol.....stan

author comment

lol

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