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WHISTLING TRAIN

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2022-04-12 12:12

Keeps awaking all
in our village
again and again

then they say
don't make children

it's 3 a.m.
tell them all what to do

twiddle thumbs
what fun
no pun

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Wed, 2022-04-13 04:31

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what do you do, while waiting to go back to sleep?
I guess tiring oneself out in order to get back to sleep in the easiest way!
And so much fun! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch

Wed, 2022-04-13 06:53

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when I can't sleep I meditate and use self-hypnosis. it helps me greatly!

*hugs, Cat

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lovedly

Wed, 2022-04-13 13:39

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Each one for oneself
depends on age and rage
lol we all
must

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