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WHINERE ME
God bless you Sir poets of
Neopoet
for helping me find
the depths of my mind
deep within me
surge waves of vibrations
and
that helps me to stay attuned
with folks like you
NOW SAY AGAIN WILL YOU ?
what and how would you feel
if one day i just
VANISHED
will you miss me
ANYONE??????
EXCEPT IAN!
AMEN....
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Sparrow
Sun, 2015-06-07 19:02
Loved
Don't ask those that disregard your works to give an opinion of whether they will miss you or not even in jest.
You see young Bard
there you will be
a part of our memory
Then when we leave this plain
All we do is call your name
And there you will be
A thinking creature of energy
Full of love and completely free.
Now be good and stop testing me
Your writing is satisfactory.
Yours as always Ian.T
lol you know we love you, U C
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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Mon, 2015-06-08 01:01
YES I SEE
as I 'm in mid sea
of neopoets poetry
do u see ?
Ian me?
author commentalidzain
Mon, 2015-06-08 13:18
let's see
Jess do enjoy some of your works. Me as well. Not sure about others. So there you have my reply to your question.
Alid
lovedly
Mon, 2015-06-08 14:32
ok thankx
three days relax
do fax
author commentweirdelf
Thu, 2015-06-11 16:41
I would only miss
your pathetic pleas for attention.
Some of your poetry is superb and it would receive more attention and feedback if you gave honest, constructive critique to others, in plain English, not pseudo-verse.
cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Fri, 2015-06-12 16:50
and I miss your views Jess
I have been too busy this whole month
another month too
but then you will see me
''critique only...''
if u dare me
you too...
I promise you
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