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When Poets depart

When Poets depart

at times we have a heavy heart
when good poets depart
why did poetry ensue?
no one knew

but on these sites one needs to take care
be aware faces we see are different
and
heaven knows why at times becomes indifferent

but good poets surface up all at some time
and
so within reach one does in poetry climb

but
keep it in mind
poets leave as does time
far behind.....
in the folds of eternity
where to search
no poet has any time!!!!!

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As a reminder of the ones that pass through this or any site it is a good write,
Poets leave here for many reasons, a good one is sense of humour failure.
There are some that feel that the sites have some poets that take over the whole thing.
Another is where the comments on their work is not proportional to the number of poets on sites.
The hard one to take is the loss of some of our best people through illness, this one should be addressed better.
We seem to be a little self orientated, but we all write whatever the reason, I think we should learn more of our fellows here and anywhere.
I remember the artists of old that due to mostly financial reasons would come together in groups, take walks together and talk of what they were doing, we cannot do such a physical thing but we can acknowledge each other on a better footing.
Computers and the www are the new walks we go on so can we all take time to see the other person across the ether..
This will do for now young Bard, one space in the reason of everything we will meet and have that walk, or just be and have a cup of tea.
Oh ! your write was quite good ,
Yours as always Ian

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

THANKS
I AM STILL ALIVE
HAVE YOU ALL FORGOTTEN ME?
SO EARLY??
YES NOW TIS ME .
POET ANONY
LOVED
and
Lovedly

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