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When I Dream of You

All I see is the sky \
cloudy or bright sunny

I only walk along the Niagara
watch wait and see
what it has now for me

Nothing more than the usual fall
tonnes of aqua
flowing through the veils
of the QUEEN OF MIST
water smiles
we laugh
as dew drops from the raincoats drop
Niagara is love of all
after all
we all enjoy the fall

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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I know my parents honeymooned there. Wife and I always wanted to go with our sweet mutt Piper because she was a wonder dog but we lost her a year ago. Our new pooch doesn’t do crowds, or people, or anything really. Savage pup.

Awesome job dear Lovedly,
Tim

you paint a picture and that picture provokes deep feelings. you just keep getting better and better...

*love, Cat

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