I think this is a lovely poem about what the advice helped you to understand, but I would have loved to have heard the advice and how it helped you form these ideas which are remarkable from the message from a child.

Good luck in the competition!

This is a solid write there is nothing I see to critique except the exclusion of said advice.

Kind Regards Seren

Children see the world very plainly, often without over complicating things like adults do. They teach us so much and we don't always realize it. This was a wonderful, sweet write. Great job.