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What if, Rocket Man was
Afraid to fly.
Would he be a
Sorry guy?

What if Brick House was?
Made of straw?
Your roommate is
Your mother-in-law.

What if
We Got the Beat?
Was really my,
Dog’s In heat.

What if Run Around Sue?
Stayed home.
She was happy
No need to roam.

What if The Train Kept A Rolling?
Didn’t roll?
There are two lost souls
Swimming in a fish bowl.

What if Dazed
Never met Confused?
Maybe he is
Guilty as accused.

What if take a walk
on the Wild Side?
Was missed by
A mile wide.

What if London?
Wasn’t calling?
Underneath the
War pigs crawling.

What if Great Balls were?
Not on fire?
Would Jerry still be
A live wire?

Turbo1904 ♥

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


Onyinyechi Cosmos

when your sentence is a straight forward question, the question mark goes at very end and serves as the terminal punctuation mark!

In stanza 2, delete the first question mark!

Then in stanza 8, delete the first question mark!

And finally in stanza 9, delete the first question mark!

You can as well read aloud and find it out for your self.

Onyinyechi Cosmos

Great write, as per your usual! highly amusing to say the very least! I love your sense of humor! keep on writing and I will keep on reading, lo!

*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy styx

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Miss Cat, how are you? I write about four poems a week. Sometimes more. I'm getting around to posting them. Thank you for taking the time to read them. ENJOY all things, Miss Cat!


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