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we are minuscule

temporary atoms
magnified by eye's magnification
500 times
if we had no eyes
we wouldn't have ever imagined
we had something
that did rise
and
that's no surprise
tis a surmise
500 times magnified
and
we cry out for more size...

Merry Christmas let it be!

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We are aren't we! :) nothing more than a blip in time and space!

I hope you are having a great time :)

Love Mand xxxxx

the beeps of time
one beep and we all are
in and out
in terms of time and space
yes we are
so beepless ourselves

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